Thursday, October 23, 2008

What I am going to do this weekend

I am going to fix my paper.
How?
I have lots good statistics, and I am using evaluative argument.
Therefore first off, I am going to need to do more specific analysis with a more solid and clear thesis statement.
Second, I have done quite a lot of research, but I am going to have to do some more research to find supporting facts.
Third, I am going to make revisions to support my claims and write a little more. I will need also need proper bibliography.

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