1. Make my paper more appealing to my audience by tweaking my topic so that it is more relavant and interesting. I need to increase its "readability" and also include more references to some of the most popular athletes from the games.
2. Incorporate more commentary and personal views into my paper so that it is not just chock-full of boring facts and history. I need to work on my evaluation and analysis of the information I include.
3. Further define what my argument is. I need to strengthen my paper's point, be more persuasive, and include some of the controversies surrounding the games.
2. Incorporate more commentary and personal views into my paper so that it is not just chock-full of boring facts and history. I need to work on my evaluation and analysis of the information I include.
3. Further define what my argument is. I need to strengthen my paper's point, be more persuasive, and include some of the controversies surrounding the games.
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