1. I need to clarify if I don't like the Prius or hybrids in general. To do this, I will probably state that its pretty cool to drive a hybrid and save gas, but the Prius ruins all of that goodness.
2. Have to make my argument more obvious. Going to start paper off more directly and go ahead and say what the deal is. Then make sure the rest of my sub-arguments go along with the main one.
3. Pretty much 1 and 2 combined. I have to make a stronger argument that focuses on a clear subject. I'll just read through my paper a few times and think about what it says and what I want to say. Maybe I'll think of something good.
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