Paper Work that needs to be done.

I have much to improve on my mid term paper. Upon actually reading it again and reading the notes that was given, I can not believe that I created something so unorganized and thoughtless. I was really just meandering through the paper most of the time. The following are the top three things I would change about my paper.

1. The structure of my paper is quite flawed. This messes with the flow, and it is very hard for the reader to see who I am arguing to.

2. I should add more research to my paper to add more credibility to it. I realize now much of my paper is just showing how I feel about the subject rather than arguing.

3.  I constantly get off topic. I need to keep focus during the paper.